Monday, January 4, 2010

Strange
I mused over this strange aspect
Two ladies trying to surpass one another
All just to hold a very special place
Both in his mind and in his heart

When will it ever enter their thoughts and mind
That each have their own special place, a different kind
I mused over this strange aspect of the two ladies
One elder to him and the other younger


8 comments:

KParthasarathi said...

Very true.The eternal fight is going on in many a man's mind. Little they realise that both compliment each other and are not intended to supplant the other.As you have said correctly each of them have a separte place in his heart for totally different reasons.Short and powerful expression

A New Beginning said...

mother in law-daughter in law situation haan!
Ya its a old story tha never ends, I wonder why, why cant a daughter in law be a daughter and mother in law be a mother..its a comple puzzle yet to be solved.Btw very well written Lakshmi!!!

Amritbir Kaur said...

A mysterious and a meaningful story. As Sana has rightly pointed out, I too interpreted it as the mother-in-law and daughter-in-law relationship. Truly, why should relationship have to certified by law, and we affix 'in-law' at the end. Relationships are built by heart.

deeps said...

thats really a strange thing to muse about
:-P
in the first place you never what women have in their mind n heart haha

sury said...

well said

subbu rathinam

Bindhu Unny said...

Interesting thought! But the ones who compete never realize this. :)

deeps said...

still musing?

Greener Bangalore said...

Sometimes the best way to respond is to Ignore! It may put all things back in the appropriate places :)