Wednesday, January 27, 2010


swaying to the breeze are the lovely trees
swishing and swashing are my curtains
unexpected yet most welcome is the mizzle
pitter patter down my window pane
and through the french door they reach to me
sprinkling water on my face
the feel so lovely and beautiful
hands held out I stand on my balcony
to savour this picturesque scene

10 comments:

A New Beginning said...

Here comes Lakshmi with yet another amazing poem :) Loved it !!!!

Destiny's child... said...

The rain scene is enchanting:)

KParthasarathi said...

I can visualise the scene.The small rain today must have impelled her to write this awesome poem

ariyathe said...

Beautiful! Your handle over words is quite amazing!

deeps said...

lovelyyyy... thats a cool one...
wow!
truly expressing the mood of the rain ... :-)

Herrad said...

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Please come by my blog and pick up your award.
Love
Herrad

PS its on Thursdays blog

Anya said...

This post is awesome
LOVE your poem :-)

Have a wonderful weekend
Anya :)

逛街 said...

hello........................................

anupama said...

Dear Lakshmi,
Good Evening!
I was in Chennai when it rained.26th,January was Achu's and Ganesh's marriage reception in GREEN PARK HOTEL,CHENNAI.i had written a post on reception.:)on 27th,morning I was surprised to see the wet road.It rained that day.I enjoyed.it was too hot.
touching and emotional lines.keep writing.
wishing you a beautiful Sunday,
Sasneham,
Anu

Saras said...

It is one thing to admire nature and quite another to be able to describe it in such exquisite fashion. Nice poem.