Monday, December 7, 2009

This poem is from Ajit Peter. He has a beautiful creativity and words just dance and come forth when he pens a poem. I like his style a lot...........simple...meaningful and elegant in all ways... the flow...the lyrics...and the beauty. In a jiffy the poem is in his heart and mind and down in a paper.......I have a keen desire to write poems with a similar touch..


Thoughts

in a drop of tear a world to see
in a drop of rain joy to be
in a tick of a clock eternity
in a single cell life to be
in a touch of feather hearts be shy
in a single word the spirits to fly
in one friend a world to see
in a wink of an eye love to be
in a ray of sunshine warmth in heart
in stars twinkle joy be got
in a single flower love to tell
in a smile to cast a spell


a drop of joy
a drop of tear
a simple smile
a simple wink
a grain of sand


little in the world
yet a lifetime of thoughts

17 comments:

Readers Dais said...

In a group of words a poem to see
In the poems words a friend to see
In the friends words affection to see
In this comment appreciation you see... :)

Is Ajit peter a blogger?if yes wud like to have his blog url...

SOrcerer said...

wow!! beautiful lines..
:)


*stumbled across your blog

A New Beginning said...

You know Lakshmi, every poet has a distinct style of writing poetry, liked the poem that you have shared here but I must tell you that your poems are no less, just keep writing my friend, different flowers have different fragrance, yours is a pleasingly different on :)

lakshmi said...

@ readers dais
thanks....your verse is also really beautiful

lakshmi said...

@sorcerer
thanks

lakshmi said...

Hi Sana
this is the best ever appreciation I hv ever received....................
your comment wl linger in my heart forever................
thanks dear........
:)

Destiny's child... said...

That's a lovely poem...:)

Anya said...

Yhis poem is fantastic
so lovely lines written
so wonderful :-)

anupama said...

Dear Lakshmi n Ajith,
Good Evening!
Very good style of writing;but Lakshmi,each one has an unique way of writing.we must be grateful for that talent.
Ajith,you must start a blog of your own!when you are blessed to express so well,please give a try!
words love should be sincere,
dreams of future should come true,
peace n happiness should prevail,
you must enter blogosphere soon!:)
wishing you a cool n lovely night,
sasneham,
Anu

HaRy!! said...

hard to define thoughts yes!

deeps said...

no wonder you like his lines...
they speak for themselves ...

Amritbir Kaur said...

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem...really enjoyed reading that.
And what a way to end: "little in the world/
yet a lifetime of thoughts"...indeed, every tear is meaningful...as is every joy, smile and wind. Very well said!

Herrad said...

Hi,
Happy Christmas.
Love,
Herrad

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Sorcerer said...

Happy New Year!!!

have a fantastic New year

Amritbir Kaur said...

"little in the world
yet a lifetime of thoughts"...a brilliant ending to an equally wonderful poem..thanks for sharing.

JITHAN said...

a nicely ended good poem..

thank u both...