Monday, May 4, 2009


Travelling on his two wheeler
He happened to come across a temple
But too hasty was he to reach his destination
To stop and pray he failed to find time.

A hand on the accelerator,
And a leg on the brake
Head turning 180 degrees
He offered a salute to the almighty.

While performing this hasty task
oblivious was he of the traffic ahead
For fast approaching towards him
Was the tanker he failed to see.

11 comments:

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

akka, welcome back.. too sad, but very poetic..
While performing this hasty task
oblivious was he of the traffic ahead
For fast approaching towards him
Was the tanker he failed to see.
love these liness

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

akka, one small suggestion, if you could please take off the word verification :)

KParthasarathi said...

A split second distraction does the mischief
A good message

Bindhu Unny said...

Fate!

Vishwanath Seshadri said...

Good message to all drivers (esp. for people driving 2 wheelers)... While driving, focus on driving.. If you want to do something else, stop driving..

cheers

Vish

lakshmi said...

Hi Friends
thanks a lot for the comments placed.
wishes for a great day ahead

A New Beginning said...

Hey Lakshmi! Welcome back and thank you for the lovely post, it does have a very important message, hope it gets through:)

sury said...

You say several things simultaneously.
1. Dont turn your eye on God even for a fraction of a second !! (obviously when on a vehicle )
2. Be pragmatic and practical even while praying God.
3. Fate is more powerful.
4. That which was to happen happened.
5. Distration harmful, even if it towards God.
subburathinam
http://Sury-healthiswealth.blogspot.com

lakshmi said...

Thanks Sana

And yes Mr.Sury, so many things said...
thanks

manivannan said...

Hi akka that's really sad but very poetic...you have sent across a strong message :) just loved it!

Keep them coming...

Hope you are doing well!

Take care.

deeps said...

Oh God!
What’s this?
Paying homage to god can also be inviting trouble if it is not at the right time and place ha?
I m not sure …
great to see some some vibrations here ..