Thursday, February 12, 2009

Each Morning

As I try to wake up each morning
My mind is all set for a fighting
It splits itself into two
Both trying, the other to outdo.

One insists on sending me out of bed
To freshen and start the day ahead
The other is ready to claim its right
And says lazing also does excite.

Between the two, raging a war so ferocious
In their views they have lot of clearness
Active one says, have time for yourself and so arise
Doing nothing, is time for self, the lazy replies.

Enough of their stupid fight I decide
No more can I let them be vied
The active one is welcome on weekdays
While the lazy one gets the holidays.



8 comments:

KParthasarathi said...

All of us pass thro this eternal fight with the active mind also taking unscheduled holidays!! A nice and imaginative poem

A new Beginning said...

Nice one:) A daily ritual with most of us;)
Thanks and all the best!

Vidya said...

I have been following your blog. Very well organized. You seem to take simple things and convert them to beautiful poems or articles. Well written. The poems are deep and touching too. Very nice.

lakshmi said...

Thanks Vidya for stopping by and appreciating the blog.

My wOrLd... said...

true one...and a nice one....
i wish i could control my lazy part....:D

manivannan said...

:) I think everyone could relate to this wonderful poem of yours!

"The active one is welcome on weekdays
While the lazy one gets the holidays"

Especially, I loved these lines.

Cheers!

lakshmi said...

thanks KP sir, Sana, Mani and Pretty angel

shri ramesh sadasivam said...

Awesome. Simply superb. Hats off.