Sunday, August 16, 2009

I am with you dear

All along I wanted to say
I am with you all the way
Inhibition I felt in expressing
Deep in my heart I kept the feeling

Pent up, my feelings I did
behind an invisible veil I hid
I knew not what I was waiting for
I have to find words to tell you for sure


Irrecoverable loss I had to face
Holding me close, my tears you did erase
And you said, “I am with you all the way dear
Let your emotions out, do not fear.”

Words of my heart you easily brought out
then I realized why I had the doubt
It was not what I wanted to say
But hear from you each passing day.

Not sure if I had been wrong
But I know your words make me strong
Now I know I need no veil
I would express truly how I really feel.

13 comments:

KParthasarathi said...

A neatly written poem with no kinks,easy flowing and expressive.

Vyshu said...

very lovely and poignant..!

Great blog..i will follow from now..will come often for more..:)

A New Beginning said...

Its beautifully written Lakshmi, youre amazing with poetry:) Each emotion has been brought out beautifully. Thanks for the lovely post:)

Destiny's child... said...

I am terrible poet but I do know to appreciate good poetry. You've expressed yourself well and what I like most about this piece is that it is free of flourishes of any sort. Great work! :)

Herrad said...

Hi,
Came by to say hello and wish you well.
Hope you are having a good day.
Love,
Herrad

Vishwanath Seshadri said...

Lovely poem.. enjoyed reading it.. like your easy and simple style..

cheers

anupama said...

dear lakshmi,
wow!what a caption and lines!simply beautiful,lakshmi!i enjoy the posts full of emotions n specially if they come straight from the ehart.:)
thanks for your visit to my blog n comments.
keep writing n really,it is so touching......
sasneham,
anu

Escapist said...

Hiya !
Oh that's good.......


Jooliiieesssss:-)

lakshmi said...

Hi friends
thanks a lot..........

readersdais said...

Hi! Lakshmi,
its definitely a great relief when ones mind has erupted emotions to its deep and nothing more to veil from,and the peace u experience from that is totally different & beautiful,very well written.

manivannan said...

Lovely poem akka! Very well written :-)

Cyrus Rumi said...

Beautiful!:)

Namaste to you,

Cyrus

Patricia Torres said...

Your thoughts are beautiful... and you put them in words with such ease!! Lovely... Love your writing..