Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Lovely Rains
Lovely is the weather today -
across the sky is the lightning
looks like streak of diamond
and beautiful grey clouds I see
forming a blanket around the sky
slightly heavier than drizzle
is the shower of rains,
gently blowing is the breeze
directing the rain water
as sprinkles on my face
nice, cool and happy I do feel.






10 comments:

deeps said...

back in kerala we are awaiting to touch this lovely lady called rains...

KParthasarathi said...

A very nice picturisation of rain bringing vividly the scene as it were.Pray,use a darker font colour.

A New Beginning said...

:) Beautiful!!

Destiny's child... said...

How I love the rain! Got some yesterday. Nice one..:)

Jeevan said...

Beautifully described the rain of yesterday :)

Greener Bangalore said...

WOW! I got drenched completely! :)

manivannan said...

*****nice, cool and happy I do feel...by reading your poem akka :-) How long since I read I them! Simply superb!!

Me too, got drenched completely!:-)

Herrad said...

Hi Lakshmi,
Came by to say hello and wish you a good Halloween weekend.
Love,
Herrad

A New Beginning said...

Lovely as ever..dont know how I missed this one:(

JITHAN said...

wet in rain....
good one!