This poem is from Ajit Peter. He has a beautiful creativity and words just dance and come forth when he pens a poem. I like his style a lot...........simple...meaningful and elegant in all ways... the flow...the lyrics...and the beauty. In a jiffy the poem is in his heart and mind and down in a paper.......I have a keen desire to write poems with a similar touch..
Thoughts
in a drop of tear a world to see
in a drop of rain joy to be
in a tick of a clock eternity
in a single cell life to be
in a touch of feather hearts be shy
in a single word the spirits to fly
in one friend a world to see
in a wink of an eye love to be
in a ray of sunshine warmth in heart
in stars twinkle joy be got
in a single flower love to tell
in a smile to cast a spell
a drop of joy
a drop of tear
a simple smile
a simple wink
a grain of sand
little in the world
yet a lifetime of thoughts
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In a group of words a poem to see
In the poems words a friend to see
In the friends words affection to see
In this comment appreciation you see... :)
Is Ajit peter a blogger?if yes wud like to have his blog url...
wow!! beautiful lines..
:)
*stumbled across your blog
You know Lakshmi, every poet has a distinct style of writing poetry, liked the poem that you have shared here but I must tell you that your poems are no less, just keep writing my friend, different flowers have different fragrance, yours is a pleasingly different on :)
@ readers dais
thanks....your verse is also really beautiful
@sorcerer
thanks
Hi Sana
this is the best ever appreciation I hv ever received....................
your comment wl linger in my heart forever................
thanks dear........
:)
That's a lovely poem...:)
Yhis poem is fantastic
so lovely lines written
so wonderful :-)
Dear Lakshmi n Ajith,
Good Evening!
Very good style of writing;but Lakshmi,each one has an unique way of writing.we must be grateful for that talent.
Ajith,you must start a blog of your own!when you are blessed to express so well,please give a try!
words love should be sincere,
dreams of future should come true,
peace n happiness should prevail,
you must enter blogosphere soon!:)
wishing you a cool n lovely night,
sasneham,
Anu
hard to define thoughts yes!
no wonder you like his lines...
they speak for themselves ...
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem...really enjoyed reading that.
And what a way to end: "little in the world/
yet a lifetime of thoughts"...indeed, every tear is meaningful...as is every joy, smile and wind. Very well said!
Hi,
Happy Christmas.
Love,
Herrad
Happy New Year!!!
have a fantastic New year
"little in the world
yet a lifetime of thoughts"...a brilliant ending to an equally wonderful poem..thanks for sharing.
a nicely ended good poem..
thank u both...
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