I am with you dear
All along I wanted to say
I am with you all the way
Inhibition I felt in expressing
Deep in my heart I kept the feeling
Pent up, my feelings I did
behind an invisible veil I hid
I knew not what I was waiting for
I have to find words to tell you for sure
Irrecoverable loss I had to face
Holding me close, my tears you did erase
And you said, “I am with you all the way dear
Let your emotions out, do not fear.”
Words of my heart you easily brought out
then I realized why I had the doubt
It was not what I wanted to say
But hear from you each passing day.
Not sure if I had been wrong
But I know your words make me strong
Now I know I need no veil
I would express truly how I really feel.
I am with you all the way
Inhibition I felt in expressing
Deep in my heart I kept the feeling
Pent up, my feelings I did
behind an invisible veil I hid
I knew not what I was waiting for
I have to find words to tell you for sure
Irrecoverable loss I had to face
Holding me close, my tears you did erase
And you said, “I am with you all the way dear
Let your emotions out, do not fear.”
Words of my heart you easily brought out
then I realized why I had the doubt
It was not what I wanted to say
But hear from you each passing day.
Not sure if I had been wrong
But I know your words make me strong
Now I know I need no veil
I would express truly how I really feel.
12 comments:
A neatly written poem with no kinks,easy flowing and expressive.
very lovely and poignant..!
Great blog..i will follow from now..will come often for more..:)
Its beautifully written Lakshmi, youre amazing with poetry:) Each emotion has been brought out beautifully. Thanks for the lovely post:)
I am terrible poet but I do know to appreciate good poetry. You've expressed yourself well and what I like most about this piece is that it is free of flourishes of any sort. Great work! :)
Lovely poem.. enjoyed reading it.. like your easy and simple style..
cheers
dear lakshmi,
wow!what a caption and lines!simply beautiful,lakshmi!i enjoy the posts full of emotions n specially if they come straight from the ehart.:)
thanks for your visit to my blog n comments.
keep writing n really,it is so touching......
sasneham,
anu
Hiya !
Oh that's good.......
Jooliiieesssss:-)
Hi friends
thanks a lot..........
Hi! Lakshmi,
its definitely a great relief when ones mind has erupted emotions to its deep and nothing more to veil from,and the peace u experience from that is totally different & beautiful,very well written.
Lovely poem akka! Very well written :-)
Beautiful!:)
Namaste to you,
Cyrus
Your thoughts are beautiful... and you put them in words with such ease!! Lovely... Love your writing..
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